early line test

Here is an early line test that I have produced to show for the recent presentation. There were a few issues that were picked up, but the main problem evident in this version is his weight distribution when he is interrupted by the door knock. He also looks towards the door and back far too fast, and there are inconsistencies with the size of his head towards the end, but this can be easily changed.

There are a fair few differences between the animatic and this first pass, most noticeably the fact that he changes the direction he intends to throw the box at the end. This was just so I could get a better anticipation with the arm movement. Also worth mentioning is the way he puts the box down when saying "ah forget it". In the animatic he raises the box up before putting it down when delivering the line; in the line test he puts it down a bit more gently as he seemed a little too angry in the animatic.

cca line test 1 from Philip Askins on Vimeo.